Marissatheblackwolf
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Post by Marissatheblackwolf on Nov 23, 2006 15:08:22 GMT -5
Ooc: I heard of this RP on a message board and I came to check it out. I like it so I'm going to audition. This is for a Medieval/Fantasy role play. Setting: A town bordered by a forest.
Bic: A cloaked figure stepped out of the dense forest. As it walked on a little farther, a large black griffin, the size of a large war-horse, appeared behind the figure. The figure pulled down its hood to reveal the face of a woman, maybe 19. Her black hair fell down to her waist as the hood was pulled off. She had a fair completion, but the thing that stood out most on her face was her eyes. Milky white orbs "looked" out from where she stood. She was blind. She continued walking and the towns folk stopped what they were doing at the sight of such a strange character and parted to make a path. The griffin followed and when they reached 1/4 of the way through, it snorted loudly. Many people jumped back and the griffin made a noise very similar to laughing. The strange pair continued walking until the girl stopped and looked back at the griffin and said, "You know the drill." Quick as a cat, she hopped on the griffin who immediately took off flying. They soared over the town over and over, hoping to find someone "interesting" to talk to.
Ooc: Done! I hope you like it, I would really like to be a part of this role play! ;D
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Post by Ashers on Nov 23, 2006 15:12:41 GMT -5
hmm, it's lacking something. Not sure what. Just be sure to seperate paragraphs when you start a new idea and such. Your capitilaztion is good and so is your punctuation. So besides that, nothing I can think of.
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Marissatheblackwolf
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Post by Marissatheblackwolf on Nov 23, 2006 15:18:02 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D
ooc: Thanks so much!
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