Ashani;; Audition;; Read!

[Ashani]

;; I shall probably do this so wrong.

The dustiness of the floorboards was incredible. The stench, over-whelming. Sighing as he stepped over another fallen cupboard, James headed towards the window. He stopped as a soft tapping sounded through the room. The branch of a tree was sillhouetted against the ghostly white curtain, causing it - the branch - to look like a severed arm.

[Ashers]

Nope, you did it right. Although, usually I prefer example posts a bit longer.

Just try in the future to make your posts a bit longer =)

Accepted

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[Ashani]

=] Thanks!
I will try.